i have a research paper i just want to edit on it

i have a research paper about :

You are requested to write a short paper concerning the subject “Gender in Architecture Profession”. In this paper, you will explore the following:

  • Express your opinion & discuss the topic of Gender Equality/ Inequality in our profession and how society & the market perceive female Architects worldwide.
  • Give an Example of one Female Architect (not Zaha Hadid). Discuss her ideas and explore her work.

i just need to edit on it because there is mistake in my work same topic i talked about i just need to fix it the mistake is that i gave example not opinion so i need you to write me an openion based on the example i have you will find it in te attachment file the example